Friday, November 30, 2012

The Chocolate Land

One cold winter night, at 6 o’clock, I woke up after having a nightmare. It was about me drowning in a tub of boiling chocolate. I found that my window was open. How could that happen?
Suddenly, a voice whispered: “Come, come into my world of chocolate.”

Outside on my windowsill a bar of chocolate appeared. When I went to get it from outside, a big hole came in the ground. Before I could scream I fell through it. I found myself in a world that was completely brown. “Wow! It’s chocolate!”, I said. I ate and ate loads of chocolate.

Suddenly, loads of chocolate Santas with sharp teeth ran after me. “Stop eating our country,” said one, and bit me on the leg. They looked very angry. They chased me until they each fell into a melted chocolate river.

When I woke up I was in my nice warm bed. “It must have been a dream,” I said to myself, but when I was getting dressed there was a chocolaty bitemark on my leg! “Weird, very weird”, I said as I walked out the door.

By EM, 5th class. illustration coming soon

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